Comments for Homeworkbalance Weblog http://homeworkbalance.wordpress.com Balancing home and Work Sat, 02 Feb 2008 08:28:57 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Ovewhelmed by your Work? by Juddy http://homeworkbalance.wordpress.com/2008/01/31/hello-world/#comment-3 Juddy Sat, 02 Feb 2008 08:28:57 +0000 #comment-3 Thanks Brett for your advice, I am grateful for your comment and the critics. I look forward into improving with time. I like the content on your blog which is very educative and there is always something interesting to capture my interest. Thanks Thanks Brett for your advice, I am grateful for your comment and the critics. I look forward into improving with time.
I like the content on your blog which is very educative and there is always something interesting to capture my interest.
Thanks

]]> Comment on Ovewhelmed by your Work? by Brett http://homeworkbalance.wordpress.com/2008/01/31/hello-world/#comment-2 Brett Sat, 02 Feb 2008 04:15:37 +0000 #comment-2 Hi there. i found you through the comment you left recently on Darren Rowes ProBlogger blog. I wanted to see your new blog for myself and welcome you to the blogesphere. Welcome! You first blog post is very well written and intriguing. The content is a great topic. I think your blog title will garnish a lot of visits for years to come. It's timeless really. So keep on blogging! ********************************** I felt the need to offer up some constructive criticism because you are new to blogging and I want you to succeed. I am taking the time to suggest because I care. I want you to succeed as you have made clear that you do want to be successful. A) Grammar and spelling are essential. Do you think your post is 100% accurate? You can always write your post using MS Word or similar word processor and use the spell check and grammar check feature. This saves me every time! B) Always include a link or two referencing your source[s] C) Add a picture for more dynamic content. Eye candy will keep many coming back. Use Google, MSN Live, or Yahoo search/Images to grab a cool photo. I hope you don't mind my suggestions. I am just trying to be helpful as I need all the help I can get, and would certainly appreciate someone doing this for me. I have been at it for over a year, and always looking to improve. Best wishes! Hi there. i found you through the comment you left recently on Darren Rowes ProBlogger blog. I wanted to see your new blog for myself and welcome you to the blogesphere. Welcome! You first blog post is very well written and intriguing. The content is a great topic. I think your blog title will garnish a lot of visits for years to come. It’s timeless really. So keep on blogging!

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I felt the need to offer up some constructive criticism because you are new to blogging and I want you to succeed. I am taking the time to suggest because I care. I want you to succeed as you have made clear that you do want to be successful.

A) Grammar and spelling are essential. Do you think your post is 100% accurate? You can always write your post using MS Word or similar word processor and use the spell check and grammar check feature. This saves me every time!
B) Always include a link or two referencing your source[s]
C) Add a picture for more dynamic content. Eye candy will keep many coming back. Use Google, MSN Live, or Yahoo search/Images to grab a cool photo.

I hope you don’t mind my suggestions. I am just trying to be helpful as I need all the help I can get, and would certainly appreciate someone doing this for me. I have been at it for over a year, and always looking to improve.

Best wishes!

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